Thursday, 9 April 2009

Neighbour's getting new window grills
Hammers, cutters, bloody loud drills
Makes me want to head for the hills
Bastards

5 comments:

  1. I think this was the best of the lot. Particularly the last line. Succinct. Emphatic. Smooth!

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  2. I like your kaikus. Forgive my ignorance, but is 'kaiku' coined by you? If so, it's brilliant.

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  3. HDWK
    Wish we could, wish we could.

    Sharanya,
    Thank you. We aspire to constantly rise on the ashes of our dead selves, to massacre various mataphors.

    Banno,
    Guilty, ma'am.

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  4. Banno,
    To clarify. A friend, who shall remain nameless, once told me of a two-word poem she composed:
    Haiku?
    Kaiku?

    We saved the thought, and when we decided that we needed to name this poetic form, we happily and shamelessly stole it.

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