Thursday 9 April 2009

Neighbour's getting new window grills
Hammers, cutters, bloody loud drills
Makes me want to head for the hills
Bastards

5 comments:

How do we know said...

do head for the hills then.. :-)

Sharanya said...

I think this was the best of the lot. Particularly the last line. Succinct. Emphatic. Smooth!

Banno said...

I like your kaikus. Forgive my ignorance, but is 'kaiku' coined by you? If so, it's brilliant.

zigzackly said...

HDWK
Wish we could, wish we could.

Sharanya,
Thank you. We aspire to constantly rise on the ashes of our dead selves, to massacre various mataphors.

Banno,
Guilty, ma'am.

zigzackly said...

Banno,
To clarify. A friend, who shall remain nameless, once told me of a two-word poem she composed:
Haiku?
Kaiku?

We saved the thought, and when we decided that we needed to name this poetic form, we happily and shamelessly stole it.